I could hear the annoying
seagulls squawking randomly. I could see the water shimmering like sparkling
diamonds. I could smell fantastic cooked sea crabs. I could feel the salty sea
water spraying frantically on me. I could taste the delicious deep fried crabs.
Where am I?
By Gordon Mei
I could smell the fresh bushy
grass as I ambled across it. I could hear the adorable foals neighing playing
at each other. I could see the ponies’ coats dazzling in the sunshine. I could
feel the ponies’ warm breath on my neck as they came to me. I could taste the
carrot from the ponies’ mouth.
Where am I?
By Georgia Milner
I saw the ball speeding pass
me I sniffed the crisp air flow into my nose. The crowd was calling my name. I
took down a man right next to the try line I could taste the sparkling rain
crash in to my mouth from the sky.
Where am I?
By Thom Stranaghan
They are all really cool. I cant believe this was there first time trying this type of writing. They are naturals!
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